The Present Wk1/2
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Write 6 sentences that detail who the story is about, where the story is set, what problem/conflict happens in the story, how they handle the problem, how the problem is solved and how the characters change.
Sentence 1 (character/scene) | One afternoon a boy was sitting on his couch playing his game. |
Sentence 2 (character/scene) | And then his mom came and brought him a present. It was a puppy |
Sentence 3 (Conflict) | The boy was happy to see the puppy at first but then he saw him with only one leg missing. |
Sentence 4 (Conflict) | And then the boy dropped the puppy and the puppy and continued his game. |
Sentence 5 (resolution) | But then the boy started to giggle at the puppies' actions. And then at the end the puppy wanted the boy to play with him. So the boy got ready and went outside with the puppy. |
Sentence 6 (how characters have changed) | At first the boy didn’t want to play with the puppy and that reminded him of his broken leg. So at the end the boy was nice to the puppy |
Here's what I wrote. Its about a boy who found a puppy in a box that his mom brought him. But then the boy didn't like it so he refused it. And then at the end the boy felt sorry for the puppy because that reminded him of his three legs. So at the end the boy decided to play with the puppy. Do you know this video?
Now write a 100 word story that includes all the details above |
In the afternoon🌞 there was a house and a boy 👦sitting on his couch🛋 playing his game🎮. And then his mom👩 came and gave him something. It was a present. The boy opened it and there was a puppy inside. The puppy was as cute as a cloud🐕. The boy was so happy to see the puppy at first but then ... The boy saw the puppy with only three legs. And then the boy dropped the puppy and continued his game. Then the puppy wanted to play with the boy and then the boy kicked the puppy and didn't even care about the puppy. Then the puppy saw a red ball and wanted to play with it🔴. And then the puppy hit himself on the bantry in the house. And then the puppy got the ball and played with it. Then the boy saw the puppies actions and started to giggle a bit and then started to end up playing with the puppy. And at the end the boy got off his game and played with the puppy instead. The end |
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