Welcome to my blog! This is a place where I can share my learning. My blog is a collection of questions, ideas, learning in progress and finished work. This year our school focus is "In Our Backyard". Please make comments so I can deepen my understanding, learn about new ideas and improve my work. Thank you for taking the time to support my learning journey!
Kia ora Richie, your poem is wonderfully descriptive! I can feel the heat from here! Can you please add a Mote of you reading your amazing poem so we can hear the rhythm. I'm looking forward to seeing what other kind of poem you choose to write about. Remember to watch Phil's video on how to make a Screencastify of your poem. I bet Christian can also help you make your Screencastify : ) Blog you later, Megan
Hi Richie, I think you have the beginnings of a great haiku poem here, "sizzling lava" and "fiery ashes" are really good descriptive words.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Richie, your poem is wonderfully descriptive! I can feel the heat from here! Can you please add a Mote of you reading your amazing poem so we can hear the rhythm. I'm looking forward to seeing what other kind of poem you choose to write about. Remember to watch Phil's video on how to make a Screencastify of your poem. I bet Christian can also help you make your Screencastify : ) Blog you later, Megan
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Richie, I agree with Megan, your haiku really feels hot! Great background picture really adds to the poem too. Great work
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