Hello Richie Here. Today I have made a Moment in Time slide. I have
Described the Tui and put 2 images of what the Tui looks like and another
image of what a Tui would look like in the native forest. And I also wrote a
Story about the 2 slides I did. If you made a native story what bird would you choose?
Blog ya later. Bye.
Kia ora Richie, what beautifully descriptive writing. I like the way you described the Tui's feet as a crooked tree. That put a fantastic picture in my mind. I also enjoyed reading about what you heard. Describing sounds adds another dimension to your story. Ka pai!
ReplyDeleteNext time, instead of starting a sentence with "And" could you use an interesting sentence starter? Like "Just then, I saw a Tui." or "In the shadows, I saw a Tui." blog you later, Megan : )