Welcome to my blog! This is a place where I can share my learning. My blog is a collection of questions, ideas, learning in progress and finished work. This year our school focus is "In Our Backyard". Please make comments so I can deepen my understanding, learn about new ideas and improve my work. Thank you for taking the time to support my learning journey!
Kia ora Richie, this is a great start! I love the way you described the Tui's eyes as bold. I think that tells us something about his personality! Can you add even more descriptive adverbs, adjectives and verbs to your lists? Then you can add this vocabulary to more sentences. What happens next? Keep giving the reader a strong picture in their mind of what the bird and their habitat look, sound, taste, smell and feel like. Keep going! blog you later, Megan : )
Kia ora Richie, this is a great start! I love the way you described the Tui's eyes as bold. I think that tells us something about his personality! Can you add even more descriptive adverbs, adjectives and verbs to your lists? Then you can add this vocabulary to more sentences.
ReplyDeleteWhat happens next? Keep giving the reader a strong picture in their mind of what the bird and their habitat look, sound, taste, smell and feel like. Keep going! blog you later, Megan : )